I am Year 7 student at Wesley Intermediate School in Auckland, NZ. I am a member of Power Hive 9 and my teacher is Mr Murray.
Hey hnin its me lizzy, I liked your describing words but i would recommend to reread it and make sure it makes sense but overall it was good.
Hey Hnin, I like your story and how you explained what happened! Maybe next time you could re-read through it and make sure it makes sense! Otherwise it's a great piece of writing!
Hi Hnin, I love your story and how you describe what happened and maybe next time you can re-read your story and make sure it make sense. :)
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Hey hnin its me lizzy, I liked your describing words but i would recommend to reread it and make sure it makes sense but overall it was good.
ReplyDeleteHey Hnin, I like your story and how you explained what happened! Maybe next time you could re-read through it and make sure it makes sense! Otherwise it's a great piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteHi Hnin, I love your story and how you describe what happened and maybe next time you can re-read your story and make sure it make sense. :)
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